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I was just walking down the street aimlessly
Looking to the sky and looking to the ground
And suddenly I saw you
You were just calmly walking down the street
And that’s when I called your name.
You looked up and saw me.
I waved to you calling you to come over
And you instantly started running to me
So I started running towards you.
There were so many people around.
We basically had to weave in between people
Since there were so many of them
But I wasn’t going to allow anyone to stop me
From seeing your beautiful face again.
And eventually we ended up together
We met somewhere in between
We were both out of breath
But it didn’t matter.
We were just so happy to see each other.
I gave you a hug and you hugged me back.
And at the moment the sun came out
And the birds began to chirp with joy.
We just stared into each other’s eyes for a minute
But it seemed like an eternity to me.
And for that minute there was no one else around
It was just you and me.
I decided to lean in and kiss you
But as soon as I touched your lips
Everything disappeared
And there was nothing else around
Just me in my room
It appeared I fell back into reality.
I guess that was all a daydream.
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For those who know, remember Erin? Yeah, my old feelings for her are re-emerging. And I hate it. This poem was a dream I had with her in it in the last couple of days. Why her? Oh, why?

Anyway, please leave comments and tell me what you think.

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:iconcolormehappy19:
Sounds like what a lot of my days are full with, I'm sorry. I know what that's like. It will get better, I promise. :heart:

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rain flow to the roots
rain drench my boots
rain douse the flame
rain forget this poet's name
:iconerilisvampyre:
Sadly beautiful.

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~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~
:iconbabay-shawdow:
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Major suckage.
Thats what ihateee

Beauty on people just amkes it all harder to forget them.

"And the beautry of grace is that it makes life not fair"

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now that i think about it, my comment didnt sound very sincere but it was meant to be

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"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.

(quoted by ~kyia6)
:icontyc113:
Thanks for that.

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Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:icontyc113:
Aw, thank you.

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Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:icontyc113:
Yes, it definitely does suck.

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Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconbabay-shawdow:
Sorry =/

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"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.

(quoted by ~kyia6)
:iconlolipopsbumblebees:
it starts out so wonderfully only to be end in the disappointment that the person isn't there. sadly, i know too well how that feels. i doubt there's a person who hasn't had themselves in a situation like that before.

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Does Buddha play D.D.R in Jesus' closet?
:icontyc113:
Yes, that is what my dream exactly was actually. I had a dream about my unobtainable love that I still had feelings for. Check out my journals and you'll find out who "Erin" is.

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Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]

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