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Expiration Date

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I never thought our love would turn to hate
But it seems that I was so wrong
It seems our love had an expiration date

When I think of the love we made
Like when we used to sing each other songs
I never thought our love would turn to hate

I thought our relationship was so safe
I thought our love would be life-long
But it seems our love had an expiration date

I thought our match was heaven made
I guess my thoughts are just so wrong
I never thought our love would turn to hate.
But alas, our love had an expiration date.
This is a villanelle, kinda. Like a mini villanelle.

I thought with someone we would be forever, but it turned out that it could die and did. It was such an awful feeling to me.

Anyway, please leave comments and tell me what you think.
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MyVampyreNightshade's avatar
Love is a fickle and wondrous thing

In any case it can be based on conditions, and the more that you give the more you find that pain is what your getting in return

but in those cases that are true you find and see that your getting what your giving back, until it spills over the edge you have so much, and then you know

At least the love you give with never expire, as mine will not for the words you write