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My Wrath by *TyC113:iconTyC113:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word




My time and my heart aren’t to be played
And I get very angry when people try.
So I advise you to not even attempt.

Or you shall face my wrath

And my wrath brings excruciating pains
That will have you begging for death to come early.
My wrath is one that not even Lucifer himself
Could even concoct
My wrath is a nightmare,
But it’s one you’ll never wake up from.

My wrath is never ending.
It lasts for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week, for 365 days a year.
Every year until you die.
And it shall only get worse year after year.

All of this could happen to you
If you choose to play with my emotions
And waste my time

So here’s a tip for you.

Don’t waste my time
Or else your time shall be very short
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Author's Comments

This I wrote when I was a bit angry last night. Yeah, pretty self-explanatory once you read it. I was pretty pissed about something.

This is also all spoken word. It's my first try at it. I hope I did well.

Anyway, please leave comments and tell me what you think.

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:iconwolven-goddess:
=Wolven-Goddess Jun 4, 2009, 3:12:27 PM
o.o -hides-
Me no likey you when you're angry.
I dun wanna get hurt!!!
^^ :hug: :heart:

Very good. I love your works. :+fav:

--
In life you always have a choice. Sometimes it's easier to think you don't.
Proud member of: #MasterPhotoshop, =DA-Networking, #iManipulate, #RoxasLoveClub, #100ThemeChallenge

:icontyc113:
*TyC113 Jun 4, 2009, 3:14:34 PM
Ok. I promise not to direct my wrath at you. You're safe.

And thank you so very much.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconwolven-goddess:
=Wolven-Goddess Jun 4, 2009, 3:15:09 PM
^^ You're welcome

--
In life you always have a choice. Sometimes it's easier to think you don't.
Proud member of: #MasterPhotoshop, =DA-Networking, #iManipulate, #RoxasLoveClub, #100ThemeChallenge

:iconcsnyder:
=CSnyder Jun 4, 2009, 3:19:03 PM
pretty intense, loving tihs
:icontyc113:
*TyC113 Jun 4, 2009, 3:23:35 PM
Thank you so very much. And thank you for faving.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconcolormehappy19:
=colormehappy19 Jun 4, 2009, 4:56:00 PM
This leaves an air at the end, a final threat. I like it. Good job.

--
rain flow to the roots
rain drench my boots
rain douse the flame
rain forget this poet's name
:icontyc113:
*TyC113 Jun 4, 2009, 5:06:17 PM
Thank you so very much. I am glad you like.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconcapnjon:
~CapnJon Jun 4, 2009, 5:16:44 PM
Wow, that is some intense wrath!

--
Being me is A LOT harder than I make it look.
:la:Here are some of my rave reviews!:la:
"Just pure liquid bottled awesome," The New York Times
"Like eating llamas and brownies!!" Readers Digest
"I just wanna go home," Dr. Phil
Avatar made by Liadeia
:iconferelwing:
=Ferelwing Jun 4, 2009, 5:23:57 PM
Not bad hon, I can definitely see that you were pissed.

--
******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
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